Posted by: KJSmyling | April 24, 2009

Morning II

beneath watery sun
above misty fields
over the traffics roar
a skylark sings its hymn
in praise of spring

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  1. Very nice one!!!! 🙂

  2. In just a few words you have created a moving and evocative piece. I loved reading it and would love to read more. Keep it up my friend!
    Best wishes,
    Christian

  3. I love that man’s intrusion into the natural beauty of the world in squished into the middle line. Almost as if our presence here is an intrussion.

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  4. […] by a particular name is talented to say the least but I don’t have a name to give.  “Morning II” and “Scarlet Strands” though different poems, use the same unique style.  […]


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